In fact, the main character is getting even more and more annoyingly whiny and pouty instead of growing and then you have the so-called vampire lover who takes on more of a parental sort of role where he's no longer her boyfriend although he supposed to be, he pretty much takes all over everything and then changes her schooling changes her whole situation around and she just sit there and says okay if you like a story where the female had no background and does what she's told then you will perhaps enjoy the story me myself I find it absolutely annoying and an insult females everywhere. I have tried and tried and tried, I have managed to make it through the first two and is not getting any better. Now I know some of his love the tortured vampire that once to remain loyal to his humanity that always drove us into a good romance so this is why first started the set of books. The similarities between twilight in the story are just really numerous you have a family vampires with some of them looking at a than the mother father figure plus vampires are venomous. I was brought in by the concept of an American female does the London and she knows martial arts and I'm thinking that I would have them were balanced heroine who is you know you but not overly so said that there could be some romance but somehow this so-called karate black belt female end up being more of a whiny person then the twilight heroine. You will find is story completely annoying.

However, I firmly believe that if you're over 14 years old. There are some funny parts of the story that did make me laugh.

I love the narrator so I have to give the narrator props considering the content that he had to work with the narration is awesome. The narration for this story was completely awesome.

Fateful by cheri schmidt